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Invitacion misteriosa parte 2POV Marshall

Cake me habia dicho que iria a buscar a Fionna ya que estaba muy preocupada despues de lo que habia pasado en la casa del arbol, asi que decidi continuar yo solo investigando acerca de la invitacion misteriosa que nos habia llegado, pero por lo que veia habia problemas ya que alguien venia corriendo asustado bueno eso creo.

M -Hola, que es lo que pasa linda?-

F -Marshall??- llorando

M -Oh lo siento Fi no sabia que eras tu, que es lo que te pasa por que lloras?-

F -Es que el tonto de Gumball me dijo que soy inmadura- enojada

M -Jaja Fi Gumball no sabe lo que es ser inmaduro por que te preocupas tu no eres inmadura o si??- so
Invitacion misteriosa parte 1POV Fionna

Estaba amaneciendo cuando desperte y escuchaba personas hablando afuera de la casa del arbol me levante y me vesti, pero la gente seguia habando y me dio curiosidad de ver. Me asome por la ventena y me sorprendi al ver quienes eran los que hablaban.

F -Marshall, Cake hola!!!

M y C *susurrando*

C -Nos vemos Marshall- entra a la casa

F -Cake!! que es lo que pasa por que no me contestaron cuando les hable-

C -Hola cariño ya estas despierta?- despistada

F -Cake te hice una pregunta! no me cambies el tema- mirando a Cake enojada

C -Oh lo siento cariño pero llevo prisa- toma una mochila y sale de la casa

F -Pero qu
Invitacion misteriosa parte 6POV Fionna

Despues de lo que me habian dicho no podia creerlo, estaba muy confundida de todo lo que me habian dicho, me quede enmudecida no sabia que decir acerca de eso.

M -Fi te sientes bien?-

F -Si estoy bien no te preocupes-

C -Cariño segura que te sientes bien-

F -Si Cake estoy bien-

PG -Sera mejor que vallas a tu a descansar debes de estar muy confundida-

F -No enserio estoy bien- desmaya

M -Fi estas bien? no responde-

PG -Doctor pastelito!!!-

M -Su alteza el doctor pastelito no esta, el se encuentra con la doctora princesa-

C -La llevare rapido con la doctora-

PG y M -Vamos contigo-

C -Subanse rapido-

[En el hospit
Diario de un asesino 2Miércoles 30/8:
Estoy frente al coliseo. Según los textos de Jordan la base se encuentra en un edifico de 17 pisos a dos cuadras. Averigüé más sobre él: cree que ellos también mataron a su padre, tiene 21 años y es muy bueno en informática. Le pedí que me consiguiera armas, que yo me encargo de la ropa y del teléfono (el mío es muy llamativo y utiliza una línea común).
-R.H.
Jueves 31/4:
Ayer a las 14:30 pregunté a un hombre que pasaba si no había por aquí una torre de 17 pisos. Me dijo, algo nervioso, que no sabía nada. No me resultó muy convincente, sin embargo no le presté demasiada atención.
Después de esa conversación, investigué un poco más y el edificio más alto es una de 8 pisos. Debe ser un error, ya voy a decirle a Jordan.
Por otro lado, Jill se quebró, es una chica un poco torpe, siempre tie
Wendy ..  Wendy était une femme formidable, tant elle était intelligente mais d'une beauté rare et pure qui rend les femmes comme Wendy triste dès leur majorité. A force de rencontrer que trop de fois le soit disant âme-sœur, qui devait la rendre heureuse et la combler. Je l'ai tout de suite reconnue. Une vieille femme vêtue de noir, preuve de son malheur quand à son mariage, elle avait cependant la tête haute. Essayant de cacher quelque chose qui était enfoui en elle profondément. Si profondément qu'on aurait pu ne rien remarquer à son visage. Mais pas pour
Invitacion misteriosa parte 5POV Mentita

Desde que Cake y Marshall llegaron al castillo el principe y ellos actuan muy estraño deben de estar ocultando algo respecto a la invitacion de esta mañana.

M -Disculpe su alteza pero no quiere algo de beber??-

PG -No Mentita no quiero nada por ahora-

M -Esta bien su alteza como ordene-

PG -Te puedes ir Mentita-

M -Por que es que pone tanto desempeño en averiguar cosas de la invitacion acaso esta escrtita con sangre?? tal vez sea asi o oculte algo mas- pensando

POV Gumball

Aun no sabemos nada de la invitacion pero averiguaremos todo lo que podamos para que no se cumpla su escrito.

M -Gumball ya sabes
Invitacion misteriosa parte 3POV Cake

Despues de que casi me vulvo loca preocupada por Fionna pude encontrarla y asegurarme de que este bien pero, no pasara mucho tiempo antes de que le pase algo a mi niña.

C -Fionna por que no nos vamos a la casa a tomar un chocolate?-

F -No Cake por que tengo mucho que hablar contigo-

C -Pero no podemos hablar en la casa del arbol?-

F -No!! por que tambien quiero hablar con Marshall y Gumball-

C -Esta bien querida aunque tambien podemos hablar en la casa del arbol-

F -Que no!!-

C -Bueno niña pero no te enojes-

F -Apresuremonos para poder encontrar a Gumball y a Marshall-

C -Claro cariño-

F -Cake haste gr
Need... Title...I walked out of the hospital room and stood for a second in the center of the hallway, then realized this would look suspicious in tandem with how I was feeling, so I went in the bathroom, into the handicapped stall, and stood there, feet planted a foot apart, heart pounding in my head, and sorting through a thousand feeling.

I was "supposed" to go turn myself in to the cops and get a nice cushy bed in a fairly sterile environment for the rest of my life. At least, that's what my Mom would want me to do.

According to Dad, I should shut up about it and feel like an idiot for the rest of my life. I'd just spent an "enormous" amount of effort
Time and SpaceTime and Space

What if our lifes are ripple in a pond? What if the mirrors reflection are there to protect us from not entering theirs world? What if you are the reflection of the past and you looking in too your own future, everyday?

Life goes on riddle keeps appearing and life keep changing, change is life. Time will always be a constant intil you change the surface by throwing a stone into the pond creating a ripple-effect of changes.

Do you dare challange yourself? Then be kind and do this, and look in the corner of your eye and look at the thing you don't want to see because it's so frightening!

Life is to short, run, RUN and continu
Wendy and the Mass MurdererI move across the night like a demon under the cover of darkness searching for the next victim the next bit of fun the next fix this might be the one that fixes me. I Jump over the alley below with the streetlights glaring at me daring me to come into the light to let myself be caught, I ignore their invitation I must get my fix. The clip clapping of a woman passes below me. I lean over the edge of the building. I’ve found her the next fix. She gets struck by the light of a passing car; she loses focus and swaddles across the pavement a sure sign of too much drink, perfect.
I follow her for the next few blocks from above testing her hearing by throwing cans to bounce nearby off parked cars, herding her into the next lane and the next until she enter my territory, my own personal bit heaven and hell. I clamber down the ladder. Grab the cloth I’d earlier placed with chloroform and grab the girl and let her enter her final sleep. I drag her body to the cellar the moon sneering
Invitacion misteriosa parte 4POV Gumball

No eh encontrado otra opcion mas que decirle la verdad a Fionna acerca de la invitacion de hace dos dias se que es malo pero ella tiene razon ya no es una niña y a pesar de que la protegemos tambien debemos tratarla como se debe.

M -Su alteza disculpe-

PG -Si Mentita dime que pasa?-

M -Llego una carta-

PG -Gracias Mentita te puedes ir-

M -Como diga su alteza-

PG -A ver que dice esta carta- se sorprende

[En la casa del arbol]

C -BMO que es lo que estas leyendo-

BMO -Encontre esto en la puerta en la mañana-

C -BMO no te hemos dicho que no leas cosas que no sean dirijidas hacia ti-

BMO -Lo se Cake pero esta
Good DogThe little one held the parents hand
I was being dragged along
I see another little one
The parent’s little one goes with the other little ones
 
The parent talks with other big ones
They stroke me
I wag my tail
They laugh
I Jump
They shout
I hide
 
The parent walks
I follow
The parent ties me up
The parent walks away
I whine
 
Other big ones stroke me
Small slow ones give me food
Little ones point at me
I lay down
 
I watch the fast big ones
Two fast big ones hit each other
Big one and slow small one shout at each other
My ears hurt
Too much noise
 
Parent comes back
Parent strokes me
Parent takes me
Parent meets other parent
 
Start shouting at one another
One parent hits other parent
I bark
One parent raises foot to hit me
Other parent gets in way
Gets hit
 
Big ones come to parents
Top big one wraps parents hand
Another top big one talks to other parent
We follow top big ones
Get into fast big ones
 
Parent strokes me
I lick parent hand
The Blue CrossAlternate Ending to “The Blue Cross”

As Valentin crept slowly over the hill, his police officers in tow, he heard wisps of conversation on the wind like the voices of the dead.  Inching closer to the pair of clergymen, one tall, and the other short, he swore his heart could be heard beating a mile away.  As he came close enough to hear the quiet conversation, he caught the end of one of Friar Brown’s sentences.
“... what they really meant in the Middle Ages by the heavens being incorruptible."
The tall man nodded condescendingly, like a skeptical snake eyeing its prey as he replied:
"Ah, yes, these modern infidels
LES MYSTERIES D' ALFRED LYRICSENFANTS : Il Ya un mystère en bois noueux notre équipe snooping a obtenu les marchandises sur le suspect qui leur a fait sauter quand quelque chose dans l'obscurité battait et cogné
CAMILLE : avez-vous vu que ? 
ALFRED : je peux l'entendre. 
MILO : C'est se rapprocher ! 
CAMILLE : je sens quelque chose. Cela ressemble à un indice.
 ENFANTS : Alfred Hedgehog trouve des tournants et des rebondissements quand il est sérieux mystérieux, il ne peut résister des indices de détection de jour comme de nuit Alfred Hedgehog toujours bonnes de choses ensembles.
Dig in, Sit DownSet up, it was one gigantic intertwined roadway collapsing on their heads and Bruno was right on top of it all getting ready to jump off. Fifteen metaphorical stories below ran Hester with no hope of getting out from under it. The demolitions expert, listed as such for actually carrying around an antique World War One era grenade, should be far away  by now.
Most people call the demolitions expert 'Dan', some 'Burn Out'. Being part of that some, we prefer 'Burn Out'.
Consider these names interchangeable as follows:

Bruno, Jumper
Hester, Runner
Dan, 'Burn out', Demolitions Expert

Consider these subject to initial change but roles ultimatel
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Both creatures, large and small began to follow me. "Little one, you aren't needed any longer." I knew I was being rude but I had to hurry back. Clambering on the large creature's back I began directing it urgently, eager to get back in time. My sight was beginning to blur and I began to have trouble breathing. I was fidgeting and wriggling in my seat but no spot seemed comfortable, and I felt so very, very hot. My body was going numb and rigid and I could barely move my limbs but I still attempted to move a clawed hand in the direction I thought I needed to go. The pain in my hands and feet began shooting up my arms and legs, like electricity was coursing through them. I cried out in terror and collapsed onto the creatures back, tears streaming down my cheeks as my body began to curl up. My sight began melting away but I managed to focus enough see a large silhouette come to me as the light faded.
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Why did I post this? Two reasons. A little to show you part of my novel but mostly to show you what happens to me when I seizure.

Remember how in my journals I mentioned I have seizures when I'm on the computer too long? That's assuming you even read them lol Well that's what I go through. The part at the beginning and end with the creature and blacking out, those are made up to attatch the chapter to the previous and next scenes. The rest of it however (at least the feelings) are 100% (okay 98%) correct.

And that, in short is why I don't like being on too long - I HATE going through that. Scary, huh? Try living it instead of reading it lol
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Critique by ~rikkilee-robertson Jan 17, 2013, 2:48:34 AM
As your proof-reader for this novel I can say that it's pretty good. And in the description, I know what you mean as I have a very different connection with reading and writing, I feel what you go through by reading what the character is going through. I like it when people interpret their own experiences/lives/personalities into their stories. So it's obvious that I love reading you're work.

Rating time! (for all that I have read.)

Originality: 4/5
Story-line: 5/5
Characters: 5/5
Creativity: 4/5
AWESOMENESS: 10/10

Overall: Everything I read is amazing. If you want to know more of what I think without me giving away the rest of it, contact me via note. :P :)
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!NotaFullDeck Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you are so lucky to pass out love. I've always stayed fully consious when having a seizure and it hurts like hell
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*Strudel--Cutie4427 Jan 17, 2013   Writer
That part was just added because it was part of my story (my long LONG story lol) But that and the first part with the creatures I made up. Everything else is what happens (I guess I didn't make it clear enough) so I don't pass out (wish I did :()
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!NotaFullDeck Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ah. yeah I wish i did too
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*Strudel--Cutie4427 Jan 17, 2013   Writer
Sorry for taking a while to reply - I'm still getting through all my notes.
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